Score: 6

"Good idea, bit problematic in execution"

submission: Drawing tutorial: Chickz

date: June 18, 2008

I think doing a series of drawing tutorials, especially for flash is a great idea. The problem here is that you may need to first of all, make the instructions a little more thorough, and second (sorry) tone down the background. You need more contrast or nobody will be able to read your tutorial.

Score: 10

"Gobble Gobble"

submission: Turkey Run!

date: November 24, 2006

W00T! Matching turkeys... It's a great matching game and was fun to make W00T!

Score: 5

"Seems like it could have been so much better."

submission: Metics 02

date: October 9, 2005

Your artwork is very clean, but some of your proportion is really unfortunate. Excellent woek on the characters and a few of the effects like the pillars exploding.

You really seemed to be lacking in the music/sound/and voice department though. The audio for this was really really nonexistent. The only audio I heard were a couple of looped impacts, some simple explosions, and a gunshot ricochet.

You're doing great, and I don't want to downplay how good your artwork is in general. You have some work to do, and I'd really suggest teaming up with someone to do the audio while you do the artwork. Other than that, great work, Peace

Score: 9

"I want it =)"

submission: In-between Saturn's Ring

date: May 27, 2005

I'm definately going to make use of this one in an upcoming flash.. Now I just have to motivate myself to finish one! =)